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【高中英语作文中学生做兼职工作的利弊TherehassomeadvantagesanddisadvantagesforstudentstotakePart-timejobs.AndIaskedmydassmateswhattheythinkaboutit.10precentofmyciassmatesthinktakingPart-timejobscanearnsom】
更新时间:2024-05-07 11:30:34
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高中英语作文中学生做兼职工作的利弊

TherehassomeadvantagesanddisadvantagesforstudentstotakePart-timejobs.AndIaskedmydassmateswhattheythinkaboutit.

10precentofmyciassmatesthinktakingPart-timejobscanearnsomemoneyandrelivethefamily'sburden.45precentofmyciassmatesthinkthattakingPart-timejobscanincreaceourexperiencesandknowthesociety,30precentofmyclassmatesthinktakingpar-timejobsspendmorestudytime,15precentofmyclassmatesthinkthestudentswillbeabletodevelopbadhabitswhentheytakeapart-timejob.

Ithinktakingpart-timejobisgoodforstudents.Butithassomedisadvantages,too.Sowhenwetakepart-timejob,weshoudfindagoodandhealthypart-timejob.

哪里写得不好如果25分可以得多少分

畅志杰回答:
  另外,whatthinkaboutit?可以改成?whatabouttheythinkaboutit?最后一段帮你改一下:Ithinkthatitwasdosomepart-timejobbetterhelpofstudentsknowsmoneywasimportantinyourlife,camebackschoolyouwillfocusonyourstudy.Butyoucann'tdomore,youalsowasastudent,sostudiedverywellwasyourgoals.我想做一些兼职的工作是更好的能够帮助学生知道学习的重要性,回到学校他们能够更加关注与学习.打死你,不要做太多,因为你还是个学生,学习的更好是你的学习目标.
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