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【我写了一篇英语作文,可以帮我改改吗?用高中的词,初中的也行.partnerIjoinanewclassthisterm.Theothersoftenneweachotherbecauseoftheywereinoneclassbeforeexceptme.Ionlyknewonegirl'snamewhenIwascome.SoI】
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我写了一篇英语作文,可以帮我改改吗?用高中的词,初中的也行.
partner
Ijoinanewclassthisterm.Theothersoftenneweachotherbecauseoftheywereinoneclassbeforeexceptme.Ionlyknewonegirl'snamewhenIwascome.SoImustmakingfriendswitheachother.ButI'mascilentboy.Ionlyknowtwoboyssatnearingme.
TheboysetthenearestmenamesXXX.Hehadblackshorthairwithgood-tempered.
Andanotherboyisdifferent.Heiswarm-hearted,talkativeandhumor.HisnameisYYY.HeseemsgoodfriendswithXXX.
Allstudentsinthisclassarehard-working.SoImuststudinghearder.
桂浩回答：
修改好的在下面：
Mypartner,
Ijoinedinanewclassthisterm.Imostlyknowanyoneintheclass..Ionlyknewonegirl'snamewhenIcame.SoImustmakefriendswithothers.ButI'mascilentboy.Ionlyknowtwoboyssittingnearme.
TheboysittingnearermeisXXX.Hehadblackshorthairandgood-tempered.
Andanotherboyisdifferent.Heiswarm-hearted,talkativeandhumor.HisnameisYYY.Thetwoboyaregoodfriends.
Allstudentsinthisclassarehard-working.SoImuststudyhard!
解晓宁回答：
mostly我查了一下，是大多数的意思。我原意是想说：我只认得一个人。。。
桂浩回答：
还有几乎的意思,Imostlydon'tkonwanyoneintheclass.刚才写错了,不好意思啊
解晓宁回答：
谢谢诶
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