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【帮忙修改一份初中英语作文.thank..talkaboutplayingplayingispartofourlife.learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.Itmeansthatifyouknowhowtoplay,youwillgetacolorfullife.Herearemyopinions.ithinkplayingincl】
更新时间:2024-04-28 19:15:40
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帮忙修改一份初中英语作文.thank..

talkaboutplaying

playingispartofourlife.learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.Itmeansthatifyouknowhowtoplay,youwillgetacolorfullife.

Herearemyopinions.

ithinkplayingincludesalotofdifferentkindsofthings.forexample,playingsportscanhelpuagetingoodhealth.takingawalkisalsoatypeofplaywhichcanloseweighteasily.ofcourse,playinganinstrumentisalsoagoodwayofplaying.Duringthisperiod,wewillnotonlyfeelhappy,butalsolearnalotofknowledge.inashortterm,idobelievethatthere'snothingmoreinterestingandeducationalthanplaying.don'tyouthinkso

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范朝回答:
  感觉你的文章太CHINGLISH了,也就是按照中文的逻辑写的,比如说这句话learninghowtoplayisalsoanimportantthing.   改成Thisisanimportantthingtolearnhowtoplay
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