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大家帮我改改高中的英语作文!应试作文,老师让一个语法错误都不能有.大家帮我查查,明天或者或天就要交了!LearningEnglishisofgreatImportantNow,Englishismoreimportantinourlife.Itiswidelyemploiedall
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大家帮我改改高中的英语作文!

应试作文,老师让一个语法错误都不能有.大家帮我查查,明天或者或天就要交了!

LearningEnglishisofgreatImportant

Now,Englishismoreimportantinourlife.Itiswidelyemploiedallovertheworld.EveninsomeinternationalconferencespeopleuseEnglish,andinmanybusinessletterspeopleuseEnglishtoo(这个too加的合适不合适?)Asthetechnology'sprogress,wehavetolearnsciencefromwesterncountriesandshowourachievementstoothercountries.(替换成them是不是更好?)Besides,Englishhelpsusbuildupagoodrelationshipwithforeigncountriesandit'salsoagoodwaytocooperateanddevelopwitheachother(这句有些别扭,怎么改?)So,wemustlearnEnglishwellinordertomakegreatcontributionstoourcountry.

BecauseofthegreatimportanceoftheEnglish,it(这个代词有无问题?)becameacompulsorycourseinbothhighschoolsandcolleges.Therefor,weshouldsparenoeffortinlearningEnglish.

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  LearningEnglishisofgreatimportance.   Now,Englishismoreandmoreimportantinourlife.Itiswidelyappliedallovertheworld.PeopleuseEnglishinmostoftheinternationalconferences,andalsoinmanybusinessletters.Aswiththetechnology'sdevelopment,wehavetolearnsciencefromwesterncountriesandshowourachievementstoothers.Besides,Englishhelpsusbuildupagoodrelationshipwithforeigncountriesandit'salsoagoodwaytocooperatewitheachother.So,wemustlearnEnglishwellinordertomakegreatcontributionstoourcountry.   BecauseofthegreatimportanceoftheEnglish,itbecameacompulsorycourseinbothhighschoolsandcolleges.Therefore,weshouldsparenoefforttolearnEnglish.
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