请英语高手帮我点评一下我的四级作文（语法、用词)
1,中国有很多学生无法用英语进行交流,由此出现“哑巴英语”现象
2,造成“哑巴英语”原因
3,提供一些可行的解决方法
"MuteEnglish"amongChinesestudents
Aphenomononof"MuteEnglish"appearsamongchinesestudentsbecausetheycan'tuseEnglishtotalkwiththeirclassmates,friendsandforeigners.
Therearetworeasonsforthissituation.First,mostofChinesestudentsstudysEnglishfortheirexamination,theypaymoreattentiontowrittentestandneglectofspokenlanguage.ItisafailtoChineseeducation.Second,manyChinesestudentsaresoshyandunconfidentinEnglishclass,theyalwayslisteningcarefully,butnotputuptheirhandstoanswerteacher'squestions.
IftheChinesestudentssolvethisproblem,asIseeit,theymustcoverthefollowingpoints:first,don'tstudyhardforexamiation,butthekonwledge;second,theyshouldpayattentiontospokenlanuage;last,iftheymeettheforeignerinsupermarketorrestaurant,theyshouldtalkwiththeporeignpeopleboldly.
Inaword,learningEnglishoranotherforeignlanuageisainteresting,notaburden,weshouldn'tstudyonlyforexamination.
里面有八个词语,由于打字打的快,出现了错误,请见谅.
